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ART ANGEL IS CURRENTLY ON HIATUS. Sorry to those who have requested, but you will have to request again when Art Angel re-opens.
Art Angel is a place where you can request fanfic trailers, reviews, and one-shots.
Art Angel Studios is the youtube channel for trailers, MVs, promos, while Art Angel Collections is a compilation of one-shot stories as requested by fans. The navigation links at the bottom will direct you to where you want to go. So whether requesting, or simply looking around, welcome to Art Angel.
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Now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see.
Hebrews 11:1
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SITE NAME:ART ANGELOPENED:JULY 04, 2009
OWNER:ELLA
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Title (/5)
Plot (/30) – Creativity/originality, comprehensible, descriptions
Characterization (/25) – portrayal, voices/emotions, interactions
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Title: Die Twice To Only Live Once
Author: EyesOfDeath
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/EyesOfDeath1/
Reviewed by: Ella
Review requested @ artangel12.blogspot.com
Title (3/5)
While the title reflects the story, it's a bit too long and sounds a bit awkward.
Plot (27/30)
Two thumbs up for originality. Your story is full of suspense with a good solid plot; revealing back stories bit by bit really keeps the reader interested. However towards the later part, the story becomes a bit cliche with the 'bad girl good guy' scenes. I admit they are very cute, but it is a bit of a cliche. Also, some readers who haven't watched IRIS (like me) might be a bot confused with the characters and I think you should explain the setting more for their benefit. Overall though, good job, your story has me wanting to watch IRIS (I was very upset when Vick died though). I liked how you allowed her to kill Bae Suek instead of sparing him. I was like 'YES! IN YOUR FACE!'
Characterization (25/25)
Well done! It's good that you use different POVs to show their thoughts/emotions and use ALL your characters to move the plot foward. You don't forget the minor characters and instead use them to support the major ones. I love Miyong's interactions with those from NSS. I especially love Vick & Miyong's smirk!
Structure (24/25)
Good pace. You manage to keep the suspense going while not neglecting the storyline. It was a bit slow towards the last part though, but then I guess you used that to develop the relationship between Haejin and Miyong.
Grammar/Spelling (12/15)
Be careful with your grammer!
SUB-TOTAL - 91/100
Bonus (4.5/5)
Love it! It's unique.
TOTAL - 95.5/100
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Title: A Summer's Desire!
Author: jjwyl93
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/2699/a-summer-s-desire-dbsk-jaejoong-korean-romance-tvxq-yunho
Reviewed by: Ella
Review requested @ artangel12.blogspot.com
Title (4/5)
I love how the title ties in with the ending!
Plot (27/30)
Although your story has lot of cliche elements, it also has lots of original and cute sub-plots. It was a very simple yet entertaining story. Thank you for sharing.
Characterization (25/25)
You portrayed each character well. Good use of POV, and well-established relationships. And to top it off, they were very realistic characters that the readers could relate to.
Structure (24/25)
You have a good solid writing style which makes your story easy and entertaining to read. However, I think the finale (3 parts) was a bit too long. You didn't had to explain in detail every activity they did all day.
Grammar/Spelling (13/15)
Minor grammatical errors.
SUB-TOTAL - 93/100
Bonus (5/5)
I loved it. It was easy to read and was heart-warming.
TOTAL - 98/100
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Sorry sightsounds (Thicker Than Blood) and Sarapyon (Distractions & Excuse Me Miss) but we don't do rated stories (that includes smut).