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Now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see.
Hebrews 11:1
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Title: Crazy for You
Author: RyeowookLover
Link: http://winglin.net/fanfic/RyeowookLover3/
Reviewed by: Ella
Review requested @ artangel12.blogspot.com
Title (3.5/5)
The title seems a bit simplistic, not that it's a bad thing, but it's too cliche.
Plot (22/30)
The atmosphere of your story was light-hearted but not too 'fluffy'. The plot is not quite original, but you certainly added your own mischievous touch to it. I especially like the part when she tries to hit on Joon, I found that unexpected and funny. However, it feels as if her relationship with Minho is going to fast, or did you do that on purpose? Other than that, you described the events in a way that the reader can picture it easily and enjoy it.
Characterization (25/25)
The strength of your writing lies in the fact that you actually took the time to build up each character and their experiences and encounters with one another. You portrayed their thoughts, embaressment, interactions extremely well.
Structure (20/25)
It was evenly paced, neither too fast nor too slow. However there seems to be confusion in they way you structure your sentences, especially in your use of 'you'. For example, in chapter 02 you wrote, 'Your speed your was so incredible that you couldn't even tell it was even you.' That's not the only case you repeat 'you', at other times you use the wronggrammer for it. I have to applaud you though on your consistency in your dialogue structures. In many cases, writers tend to mess up the stucture of dialogues, but despite having a lot of dialogue in your story, you've remain constant.
Grammar/Spelling (7/15)
While portraying characters are your strength, grammer/spelling is your weakness. I don't know if it's because you type too dast, but you make a lot of mistakes in capitalization, missing letters in words, and simply mispelled words. You also have to be care ful with your tenses and putting your thoughts into words. For example:
'This laugh was always made you feel better any time something bad happened' (Chapter 02)
'Your heart struck a beat, that he must of heard' (Chapter 03)
'So I was wondering...........want a bet' (Chapter 05) - 'want to bet' or 'wanna bet'
Bonus (5/5)
All in all it was cute and quirky, and fun to read.
TOTAL - 82.5/100