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Now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see.
Hebrews 11:1
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Title (/5)
Plot (/30) – Creativity/originality, comprehensible, descriptions
Characterization (/25) – portrayal, voices/emotions, interactions
Structure (/25) – pace/flow, writing style, sentence structure
Grammar/Spelling (/15)
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Title: A Different Side of Love
Author: ShadowYin
Link: http://winglin.net/fanfic/SYdifferent/
Reviewed by: Ella
Review requested @ artangel12.blogspot.com
Title (4/5)
The title related to the story on a certain level, but it didn’t entirely suit it. The title talks about love, but I didn’t really see that in the story. The story spoke more about regrets.
Plot (20/30)
A story about brotherly love, of regrets, and of life. This is a story you don’t often see on winglin, and is fitting as a one-shot. You have good strong descriptions, and I especially like how you started by foreshadowing the tragedy to come. This definitely builds up the sad atmosphere of your story and gives a good visualization to your readers. However being a one-shot, it leaves little room to clearly define the plot. It seems to me that the story basically revolves around Donghae’s bitterness and feelings of self-pity. Nonetheless, the plot is easy to understand and evokes emotions from the reader.
Characterization (20/25)
You have definitely voiced the emotions and thoughts of Donghae thoroughly. One would certainly sympathize with his anguish and lost. It would have been nice to see more interactions between Donghae and his brother though. That way the feelings of lost would have been more emphasized. On the other hand, Donghae’s interactions with his father served to strengthen Donghae’s emotions. All in all, your portrayal of characters is good but I would recommend allowing more interactions between the different characters.
Structure (20/25)
I really liked the questions you presented in the beginning. It not only gets the readers thinking but also reinforces your emotions behind each question. I would suggest that you avoid making assuming questions as in the beginning as you may not necessarily get the answer you want. As far as the flow goes, it was at a pretty reasonable pace, but the sudden changes in setting threw me of a bit, making the story a bit choppy. It would've been nice if you just stuck to one style. I thought using the dates were good, maybe you could’ve done it in a dairy format? Just my suggestion. The ending quote was really good, but I’m not too sure about the questions, the quote could’ve probably worked better.
Grammar/Spelling (14/15)
Overall, understandable, minor mistakes here and there but nothing that hinders the readers.
Bonus (4/5) – I’m not really a fan of this genre, but I really liked your poster. It really reflected the atmosphere of the story.
TOTAL – 82/100
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Title: Like A Mockingbird
Author: lust;
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/mocking_lust/
Reviewed by: Ella
Review requested @ artangel12.blogspot.com
Title (5/5)
I looove your title. Two thumbs up for originality.
Plot (28/30)
Though it got off to a weak start, the story developed really well. It’s usually hard to find a decent plot in a one-shot or short story, but telling the story from two different points of view gave it the twists a mystery plot needs. The first chapter was a bit confusing though but after reading the second chapter, things started to make sense. Your ending is especially good; it tied up all the loose end and at the same time left a deep impression on the reader. I know I got chills when I was reading it.
Characters (25/25)
Telling it from two different points of view definitely nailed it. It allowed you to express each character emotions and personality fully. At the same time, it did not hinder the interactions between the two characters and even gave life to minor characters.
Structure (25/25)
It was neither too fast nor too slow. I said it before and I’ll say it again, writing it from two different perspective was a really nice touch. The difficulty with writing from two angles on the same view is that things overlap and the repetition can bore the readers, but you pulled it off and even managed to express the emotions of each character more intensely.
Grammar/Spelling (14/15)
Deducted a point for minor mistakes.
Bonus (4/5) – Although I don’t like tragic endings, I can’t deny how good your writing is. It gave me goosebumps as I absorbed the characters emotions and personality. And your poster was a good touch; it gave just the right vibe for the story.
TOTAL - 101/100
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